Writing Tips series
Writing
[info]coquette7
Last summer, I wrote over 100K words of Twilight fanfiction in a little over a month.

Then I stopped writing and learned how to write.

A few weeks ago, I mentioned on my personal journal that I might start a series of writing tips, and I received some positive response to the idea. I do A LOT of reading on the subject because I know I still have so much to learn. While I’ll never call myself a writing teacher or a great writer, I would like to share some of the things I’ve learned in my own studies.

In other words, I’m not trying to tell anyone how to write because I think I’m a good writer. I’m just another student, who is sharing her notes on the subject. I know there are many other people out there like me, who are always looking for an opportunity to learn or who just need to be reminded of the basics every now and then.

I will post these tips on my personal journal, [info]coquettish7. (Not here!) These entries will be unlocked and open to everyone to read. (Personal entries will remain Friends Locked.)

Some of the things I plan to cover:
1. How to overcome writer’s block
2. How to write vividly without abusing adverbs and adjectives
3. Grammar and punctuation guidelines
4. Why reading is more important than writing
5. The true purpose of a rough draft
6. How to create interesting characters
7. Editing Checklists
8. The vital components of a scene
9. Active versus passive voice
10. Et cetera, et cetera, you get the point

Some tips may be quick -- others may delve deep into the subject. I don’t have a schedule for posting these, but I should have the first part of the series up later today.

Please, please let me know if there’s something you’d like for me to discuss!!

x-posted to [info]coquettish7

Citizen Erased -- Epilogue
Writing
[info]coquette7
Summary: Disoriented after her transformation into a vampire, Bella struggles with amnesia. As she learns to control her new powers and abilities, she must also come to terms with what she is ... and with the vampire she doesn’t remember marrying. Bella/Edward.

Previous Installments:

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four & Five
Chapter Six
Chapter Seven
Chapter Eight
Chapter Nine
Chapter Ten

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Citizen Erased
Written by Coquette

Epilogue )

Citizen Erased -- Chapter Ten
Writing
[info]coquette7
Summary: Disoriented after her transformation into a vampire, Bella struggles with amnesia. As she learns to control her new powers and abilities, she must also come to terms with what she is ... and with the vampire she doesn’t remember marrying. Bella/Edward.

Author’s Note: I apologize for the hiatus. I’ve been writing an original novel, and I hope you can forgive my neglect on the Twilight front. Thank you for your patience and sweet words of encouragement.

Citizen Erased is now complete. The final chapter and epilogue will be posted today and tomorrow respectively. No waiting! :)

Let’s get to it then.

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Previous Installments:

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four & Five
Chapter Six
Chapter Seven
Chapter Eight
Chapter Nine

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Citizen Erased
Written by Coquette

Chapter Ten )

NEW - Personal Journal Created
Writing
[info]coquette7
Hey everyone! Just wanted to let you know that I've created a personal journal, since this journal is only for fanfiction.

I got lonely. :(

So if you'd like a new friend or want to hear me rant about writer's block, come visit me at [info]coquettish7. I'll be far more active over there than I am here. At least, until the Twilight-fic muse bites me in the ass again.

(Yes, I will be finishing my stories, for those of you who are wondering.)

Citizen Erased -- Chapter Nine
Writing
[info]coquette7
Summary: Disoriented after her transformation into a vampire, Bella struggles with amnesia. As she learns to control her new powers and abilities, she must also come to terms with what she is ... and with the vampire she doesn’t remember marrying. Bella/Edward.

Previous Installments:

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four & Five
Chapter Six
Chapter Seven
Chapter Eight

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Citizen Erased
Written by Coquette

Chapter Nine )

Citizen Erased -- Chapter Eight
Writing
[info]coquette7
Summary: Disoriented after her transformation into a vampire, Bella struggles with amnesia. As she learns to control her new powers and abilities, she must also come to terms with what she is ... and with the vampire she doesn’t remember marrying. Bella/Edward.

Previous Installments:

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four & Five
Chapter Six
Chapter Seven

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Citizen Erased
Written by Coquette

Chapter Eight )

Citizen Erased -- Chapter Seven
Writing
[info]coquette7
Summary: Disoriented after her transformation into a vampire, Bella struggles with amnesia. As she learns to control her new powers and abilities, she must also come to terms with what she is ... and with the vampire she doesn’t remember marrying. Bella/Edward.

Previous Installments:

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four & Five
Chapter Six

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Citizen Erased
Written by Coquette

Chapter Seven )

Citizen Erased -- Chapter Six
Writing
[info]coquette7
Summary: Disoriented after her transformation into a vampire, Bella struggles with amnesia. As she learns to control her new powers and abilities, she must also come to terms with what she is ... and with the vampire she doesn’t remember marrying. Bella/Edward.

Previous Installments:

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four & Five

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Citizen Erased
Written by Coquette

Chapter Six )

Yes, Please
Writing
[info]coquette7
Summary: COMPLETE. One-shot. While out of town, Bella devises a way to finally seduce the ever virtuous Edward – with a little help from an unexpected source.

Time period: Takes place during Eclipse, when Edward takes Bella away for the weekend to see her mother.

Warnings: NC-17 for sexual content.

Yes, Please )

Citizen Erased -- Chapters 4 & 5
Writing
[info]coquette7
Summary: Disoriented after her transformation into a vampire, Bella struggles with amnesia. As she learns to control her new powers and abilities, she must also come to terms with what she is ... and with the vampire she doesn’t remember marrying. Bella/Edward.

Previous Installments:

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three

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Citizen Erased
Written by Coquette

Chapter Four & Five )

Citizen Erased -- Chapter Three
Writing
[info]coquette7
Summary: Disoriented after her transformation into a vampire, Bella struggles with amnesia. As she learns to control her new powers and abilities, she must also come to terms with what she is ... and with the vampire she doesn’t remember marrying. Bella/Edward.

Previous Installments:

Chapter One
Chapter Two


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Citizen Erased
Written by Coquette

Chapter Three )

The Small Print -- Chapters 2, 3, & 4
Writing
[info]coquette7
Summary: Charlie lands Edward in jail. Hilarity and community service ensue. However, while on a community service assignment in the lesser known areas around Forks, an encounter with an elderly citizen in need leaves Edward and Bella with a much bigger problem on their hands.

Time Period: Sometime between New Moon and Eclipse.

Previous Installments:

Chapter One

The Small Print – Chapters Two, Three, and Four )

Citizen Erased -- Chapter Two
Writing
[info]coquette7
Summary: Disoriented after her transformation into a vampire, Bella struggles with amnesia. As she learns to control her new powers and abilities, she must also come to terms with what she is ... and with the vampire she doesn’t remember marrying. Bella/Edward.

Previous Installments:

Chapter One


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Citizen Erased
Written by Coquette

Chapter Two )

Citizen Erased -- Chapter One
Writing
[info]coquette7
Summary: Disoriented after her transformation into a vampire, Bella struggles with amnesia. As she learns to control her new powers and abilities, she must also come to terms with what she is ... and with the vampire she doesn’t remember marrying. Bella/Edward.

Rating: R for future chapters. Beginning chapters are PG.

Author’s Note: This story stands completely on its own. However, it is technically a sequel to a previous story, Spiral Static. If you have not yet read it, you can read this story without a problem. If there is any backstory new readers need to know, I will be sure to explain it in full detail. Or you can read Spiral Static first. Up to you. Hope you enjoy.

“Wash me away. Clean your body of me.
Erase all the memories. They’ll only bring us pain.”

Citizen Erased – MUSE

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Citizen Erased
Written by Coquette

Chapter One )

The Small Print -- Chapter One
Writing
[info]coquette7
Summary: Charlie lands Edward in jail. Hilarity and community service ensue. However, while on a community service assignment in the lesser known areas around Forks, an encounter with an elderly citizen in need leaves Edward and Bella with a much bigger problem on their hands.

Time Period: Sometime between New Moon and Eclipse.

Pairing: Edward/Bella

Rated: R just to be safe for future chapters. This chapter is completely PG.

The Small Print – Chapter One )

Spiral Static -- Final Chapter & Epilogue
Writing
[info]coquette7
Summary: His lips were still curled in a smile as he touched them to mine again and again in a rain of soft kisses. “I’m not laughing at you,” he repeated, each word whispered between a kiss. “I’m adoring you.” Edward/Bella.

Previous Installments:
Part One
Part Two
Part Three & Four
Part Five
Part Six
Part Seven
Part Eight
Part Nine

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Spiral Static
Written by Coquette

Part Ten & Epilogue )

Spiral Static -- Part Nine
Writing
[info]coquette7
Summary: His lips were still curled in a smile as he touched them to mine again and again in a rain of soft kisses. “I’m not laughing at you,” he repeated, each word whispered between a kiss. “I’m adoring you.” Edward/Bella.

Previous Installments:
Part One
Part Two
Part Three & Four
Part Five
Part Six
Part Seven
Part Eight

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Spiral Static
Written by Coquette

Part Nine )

Spiral Static -- Part Eight
Writing
[info]coquette7
Summary: His lips were still curled in a smile as he touched them to mine again and again in a rain of soft kisses. “I’m not laughing at you,” he repeated, each word whispered between a kiss. “I’m adoring you.” Edward/Bella.

Previous Installments:
Part One
Part Two
Part Three & Four
Part Five
Part Six
Part Seven

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Spiral Static
Written by Coquette

Part Eight )

Spiral Static -- Part Seven
Writing
[info]coquette7
Summary: His lips were still curled in a smile as he touched them to mine again and again in a rain of soft kisses. “I’m not laughing at you,” he repeated, each word whispered between a kiss. “I’m adoring you.” Edward/Bella.

Previous Installments:
Part One
Part Two
Part Three & Four
Part Five
Part Six

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Spiral Static
Written by Coquette

Part Seven )

Spiral Static -- Part Six
Writing
[info]coquette7
Summary: His lips were still curled in a smile as he touched them to mine again and again in a rain of soft kisses. “I’m not laughing at you,” he repeated, each word whispered between a kiss. “I’m adoring you.” Edward/Bella.

Previous Installments:
Part One
Part Two
Part Three & Four
Part Five

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Spiral Static
Written by Coquette

Part Six )

Spiral Static -- Part Five
Writing
[info]coquette7
Summary: His lips were still curled in a smile as he touched them to mine again and again in a rain of soft kisses. “I’m not laughing at you,” he repeated, each word whispered between a kiss. “I’m adoring you.” Edward/Bella.

Previous Installments:
Part One
Part Two
Part Three & Four

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Spiral Static
Written by Coquette

Part Five )

Spiral Static -- Part Three & Four
Writing
[info]coquette7
Summary: His lips were still curled in a smile as he touched them to mine again and again in a rain of soft kisses. “I’m not laughing at you,” he repeated, each word whispered between a kiss. “I’m adoring you.” Edward/Bella.

Previous Installments:
Part One
Part Two

Author’s Notes: I wrote so much for this installment that I had to split it into two parts to keep it nicely segmented. A bit of symbolism with the rose petals. But you probably already figured that out. Hope you enjoy Part Three and Four, presented here together.

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Spiral Static
Written by Coquette

Part Three & Four )

Spiral Static -- Part Two
Writing
[info]coquette7
Summary: His lips were still curled in a smile as he touched them to mine again and again in a rain of soft kisses. “I’m not laughing at you,” he repeated, each word whispered between a kiss. “I’m adoring you.” Edward/Bella.

You can read Part One by clicking here.


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Spiral Static
Written by Coquette

Part Two )

Spiral Static -- Part One
Writing
[info]coquette7
Summary: His lips were still curled in a smile as he touched them to mine again and again in a rain of soft kisses. “I’m not laughing at you,” he repeated, each word whispered between a kiss. “I’m adoring you.” Edward/Bella.

Rated Mature for sexual content.

Disclaimer: All credit and appreciation for these wonderful characters goes to Ms. Meyer.

“We’ve been waiting too long.
Waiting for the wrongs to just disappear.”
Spiral Static (live version) – MUSE

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Spiral Static
Written by Coquette

Part One )